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12/10/09
What a lovely story. I like the way you have included the rainbow and colours.
12/11/09
I like how all the colors blended together to make a rainbow while she was on the roller coaster. That was a neat story. Good job.
12/11/09
I really liked your humor in this memoir.

A few minor punctuation errors, but nothing significant.

You couldn't pay me enough to get me on a roller coaster.
12/11/09
I could really relate to your story. I only liked the ride on the roller coaster after my feet were back on solid ground. God's promises are truly amazing.