The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/09


A very amusing story of a new start on homemaking. You used vivid illustrations quite well and made me feel as if I were there watching you!

A tip: a bit of editing would be in order, especially grammar and sentence structure. You have written a nice piece here, so keep the pencil sharpener handy! Blessings.