The Official Writing Challenge
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12/04/09
wonderful. i didn't stop until i got to the end. at first i didn't get it but at the end am like, WOW!
12/06/09
Wonderful story, well told and well written. I liked this from beginning to end. Good use of topic too. You may just rate with this one.
I like how you made smooth transitions. Fluid writing. A pleasure to read.