The Official Writing Challenge
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You truly are a storyteller. This is excellent. It reads like a mini novel and says so much. I found it captivating right to the end.
12/06/09

Very interesting story and well written. I was slow picking up why they were at the police station, but now it's all clear. I like this very much. Great storytelling.