The Official Writing Challenge
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12/09/09
I like this! Good job. Nicely done.
12/09/09


A sweet reminiscence, most endearing. Blessings on your ever-growing family! God is so good...hallelujah! A tip: double check spelling, such as "piece" (peace) and "seize" (cease). A bit of editing will click into rhythm the lines and words. Thanks for sharing.
12/09/09
Beautiful message about instilling our faith in our children. Congrats on being a grandparent, it is wonderful!
The rhythm was a little uneven at times, but keep working and practicing, you are off to a great start!