The Official Writing Challenge
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What an eandearing story. If this is true how blessed you are to have such good memories of the carrier, known as Charlie. I could picture the man and a parade of children along beside him tottering down the street. My favorite part was of course was the realtionship between the doggy and Charlie.(William)
Nice job. Other than maybe tucking a little more dialogue in this is very good.
12/06/09
Charming bit of storytelling.

Excellent character study.

You might want to work a bit on some of the sentence structure for clarity sake. Also, keep an eye on those parenthetical phrases.

Loved the story and it certainly stirred up some fond memories in my soul.
12/06/09
I feel as if I know Charlie and I'm hoping he is a real person. What a legacy he left if he is real. Good story telling. Thanks for sharing.