The Official Writing Challenge
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11/28/09
Beautifully passionate...it pulled at my heartstrings.
11/28/09
This had "shades" of the Song of Solomon... Your images here are beautiful!
Congratulations on your win. I loved the way you wrote this. I felt as if I was stepping back into time such as prose from days gone by or as one commenter put it, the psalms. Such passion, aches of the heart, and hope described through these passages are amazing.I could feel the presence of the Lord as I read this. I truly was blessed by this. Thank you.
12/03/09
Congratulations on your win. Very passionate and sincere. It read like a Psalm.
12/03/09
I can feel the longing of the soul as I read this beautiful poem. Congrats on 1st in your level and 2nd overall! Wow!
12/03/09
Thank you all for your encouraging comments! My prayer was that God might touch hearts with these words. Thank you so much!
12/03/09
Congrats, Lacy (for your 1st place in your level AND your Editor's Choice award)!
Breathtakingly beautiful! Congratulations on your 2nd place EC!