The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/09
Oh my! :) What a story.. I had no idea what was happening, how funny! Very creative idea. You perfectly illustrated Numbers 32:23! :)
Wow! Loved this story-what s surprise ending. Did this actually happen?
You kept me spell-bound from the start, Good job!
11/30/09
This is a fiction story, but based on a true item in the newspaper as in the last paragraph, so the attempted smuggling did happen.
Lois
12/02/09
It just shows you how efishent our Australian customs inspectors are, but what a great little story.