The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked this piece probably because I have a son named Will in Alabama who runs...mostly on a basketball court. I liked the 'nailed' parts and ferreting out Will's hidden nature...this reminded me of my son also. I didn't like that the coach handed those bibles to someone else, while he was praying this prayer. Did Will have anything to do with the bag or was it coach's idea. While the writer has control over the direction or outcome of a story, the reader wants the answers for the why, what, how etc.
Keep up the good work.
08/29/05
I really liked this one! Very good!