The Official Writing Challenge
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11/27/09
I enjoyed this special Thanksgiving Story. We all have so much to be thankful for on Thanksgiving, and every day.
11/29/09
An absolutely precious story! I did notice one little thing you may want to eventually change and that is you speak of Nana being at church the Sunday before Thanksgiving. Then in one part your thoughts are for the Pastor to hurry because "tomorrow" is Thanksgiving. Other than that, a delight to read! Laura
12/01/09
This is a lovely story. I love Grandmas having meaningful input in the grandchildren's lives. It refreshes and reminds me of my role. Your delivery was most enjoyable- lots of show rather than tell.