The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
I really enjoyed this story, but I would like to see an ending that was a bit stronger--. The story seems to have something important to say, I'm just not sure it's finished yet . . .
11/23/09
I was quickly drawn into your story. The auto thief confession was a unexpected twist in the story. But why did the police bury his file if he never was caught or turned in?
I love the descriptions of the dusty attic! I was waiting for my asthma to flare up just reading about in such vivid detail!

I agree with the others. Why did the father feel it was important to share this information after he was gone? What was the son suppose to do about it?

Perhaps the son has a history too, that we don't know about?