The Official Writing Challenge
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11/22/09
Ahhh...I could just feel the emotions of the speaker. (I saw Queen Elizabeth when I was in third grade in the Bahamas.) Well done! Keep writing.
I also responded with AWWWWW! I like how the MC likened her legs to the broken tree-very descriptive!

I work with people who have disabilities, and even tho most cannot speak, I am sure they are Heaven's Royalty!
Mum is right, white would be more fun since there would be no sun in Heaven above. An emotional story I will never forget. A perfect use of the colour yellow.
11/25/09
I really enjoyed this! It was full of feeling and I felt I was right there with you. Obvously written from the heart!