The Official Writing Challenge
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UMMM this is good but you could have reached a little further down in your heart and soul and worked on it just a little bit harder I understand a little bit about where you came from but from now on just kinda watch your spelling and how you put things other than these few things it's a good story feel free to check out some of my poetry and see how I write I need alot of help myself that's why I don't mind letting someone know what they could do so they can let me know what to do in order to someday become the best writer I could ever be.
This was a little uneven but it's a nice start.