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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Luggage (08/15/05)

TITLE: A Bag Story
By karen McLamb
08/20/05


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I grew up knowing nothing about luggage, until Grandma came over from New York City.
Opening this little bag, which looks like a box, she said it is her luggage.
I say Grandma; this is a bag not luggage.
What is a luggage? She replies! Tote bags, that you carry you’re belonging in, for an overnight stay.
Grandma! Yes! I always carry a plastic bag over my friends’ house.
I never had a tote bag to pack my clothes in.
You will! She said!
Every time I go away mom makes me carry a plastic bag, for my overnight stay.
One day I pray for a box, it never came…
I took a chance and pray. Nothing but a plastic bag, just larger this time!
Then I utter to myself, I will wait like Grandma Said.
Just to have my own!
I receive my new two-piece blue rainbow luggage set on my ninth Birthday I really enjoy it until, my sweet sixteen Birthday. I gave it away to my cousin, to enjoy. And got my own three-piece gray luggage set.
I really learn how to take care of my luggage.


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Shonnah McGrew08/24/05
UMMM this is good but you could have reached a little further down in your heart and soul and worked on it just a little bit harder I understand a little bit about where you came from but from now on just kinda watch your spelling and how you put things other than these few things it's a good story feel free to check out some of my poetry and see how I write I need alot of help myself that's why I don't mind letting someone know what they could do so they can let me know what to do in order to someday become the best writer I could ever be.
Shari Armstrong 08/29/05
This was a little uneven but it's a nice start.