The Official Writing Challenge
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11/22/09
Great thoughts! I almost missed the topic, until I read it again. It might help to restate your theme at the end to tie things together. Keep writing.
I liked your overall story, but seemed burried in some of the chatter about responsibilities, and such. Yet, I liked how you tied in the opening paragraph of medallions as rewards, and the ending of having to wait and work hard to possible obtain the reward.
I did not know taxi's in NYC were called medallions. How did that come to be?