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11/19/09
When I got to the end & realized what the "match" was really all about, I had to re-read the story & enjoy it all over again! Very cute!
11/22/09
This is awesome!!! At first, I thot it was a tennis match, then maybe a video game. I was totally confused with the facial expressions. I got it when the baby food jars were mentioned. I do hope this is a winner for you!
11/27/09
I loved this story...your description of a young father's experience was very imaginative. And cute, I must say. :) Good work. Congrats on second placing. :)
11/29/09
This was a very fun piece! I also loved the surprise ending. I was wondering what sport it could be... Then I realized it was one where most men are outmatched. Very nice story.