The Official Writing Challenge
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Descriptive imagery, yet I was confused by this poem and not sure what you were saying. I did not understand your concept of yellow until mentioned in the last section.
All of your descriptions do, indeed, remind me of the bright and fresh color of yellow! The tint of yellow after a storm is a lovely description of the peace we can have even as we regain our footing after turmoil. I enjoyed your poem.
Thanks for the comments, and critiquing :)