The Official Writing Challenge
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Descriptive imagery, yet I was confused by this poem and not sure what you were saying. I did not understand your concept of yellow until mentioned in the last section.
11/23/09
All of your descriptions do, indeed, remind me of the bright and fresh color of yellow! The tint of yellow after a storm is a lovely description of the peace we can have even as we regain our footing after turmoil. I enjoyed your poem.
Thanks for the comments, and critiquing :)