The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/05
I won't forget the lesson of Luggage Larry. The story flowed nicely.
AWESOME!!!!!
08/26/05
Very nicely done, better than beginner's level.
This was very good, drew me in from the title to the victorious ending.
08/27/05
This story is sweet and touching. It's easy to visualize the events. It flows nicely. Great job!
This was very well done. A creative story with a great message. Thanks for sharing.
08/28/05
Very nice entry with a good message. I especially liked the idea of all of his fears,worries etc. being in the suitcase. Great analogy.
08/28/05
Nice writing and nice message. Really enjoyed the read.
08/29/05
I love that story, how prescious. How wonderful when the word of God reaches into our hearts and sees our every need. Congratulations! Awesome..God bless ya, littlelight
08/29/05
I didn't get to read this until after the winners were posted - well deserved!!!
08/29/05
A truly wonderful and well written story! Congratulations!
08/29/05
Congratulations on 1st Place! This is a great story and I loved the touch of hope for the lost at the end. Blessings!
What a lovely story - really drew me in. God bless and congratulations! love and light
what a wonderful story, I also had tears welling in my eyes, and thats not an easy thing to get me to do. Congratulations
09/01/05
Shelley, congratulations on your win in both the Level 1 awards as well as in the Editors' Choice - no small feat for a "beginner." So now it's time for you to move up to Level 2. Well done! With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
09/01/05
A very touching story.I'm really moved by it.
Shelley, I really enjoyed this story. Well done!

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Outstanding!!!!!!!!!
10/06/06
Great use of symbolism!