The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/09
Beautiful memory written well enough I can see it myself and feel the peace and love God showed you.
Well written-easy to see myself there and feel how the character felt.
11/21/09
A very vivid description of a treasured memory! Enjoyed reading it very much.
11/25/09
Vivid descriptions and a very believable story. Good job.

mona
12/04/09
Your descriptions are very vivid and bring the scenes to life! Great job!
12/31/09
Congratulations on drawing out the emotions as well as the describing the scenery.
You've refreshed my heart, by reminding me of how God led me through a similar teenage experience - and similar teenage emotions - at a Christian youth camp in the mountains. Thank you Barbara and God continue to bless you.
02/19/10
God has blessed you with a wonderful gift for putting an experience into words so others can join in your memory. I look forward to more of your real-life stories!