The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice story! I love how you made money AND got the flowers to play with. That was awesome. I have heard that weeds are only unwanted plants. These little flowers are pretty, they should not be made out to be the bad guy. I, too,like dandelions, and when presented with one by a child, my heart melts! I like your ending too. Did you forget about blowing wishes on the fluff?

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11/22/09
You packed a lot of info into this seemingly short story. It covers a lot! I too picked up on the double spacing between paragraphs. You did a very good job on presentation of this story.