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WOW. Powerful tale. You so beautifully described someone who can overcome everything with the power of God.
Nice tale; poetically engineered! Nice rhymes too except for the near rhymes- 'decades' and 'made'. Your heroine made terrible mistakes in life and marriage, but as you did note, found amazing and exceeding grace. I wish she would be remembered more for virtue and faithfulness, than for her yellow dress and comely grace. And wish to ask: did her first husband whom she met at the crusade ground die before she married the next? An excellent work; keep it up!
11/22/09
This is a lovely story; however, I found the rhythm and rhyme off. The actual story was well presented. I too wonder if her husband had died prior to her remarrying.