The Official Writing Challenge
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11/20/09
A beautiful, bright and happy memory. I could picture everything.
What a precious memory you have of your grandmother! I love the vivid word pictures in your opening paragraph.
11/22/09
This was a very sweet story of a beautiful relationship between a grandmother and granddaughter. I like the way you intertwined scripture as well throughout. One thing I noticed is not all paragraphs are separated by two spaces. It's easier to read, of course, when they are. Good job!