The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
What a neat idea for Yellow. It's hard to put them on the bus, feels like your whole life is floating away in a big yellow bubble and you have no control. I loved it.
Sweet story.it is soooo hard letting them go. Did you notice that the French Toast became pancakes?
11/22/09
Darling story! Perfect for the color of the week. One thing I noted is that the mother agreed with the daughter that they would have french toast, then you mention the mother making pancakes. Must be the proofreader in me. Very good writing!