The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/09
This story really touched my heart. There were tears in my eyes when the two sisters met at the end. Very well done.
11/20/09
This was extremely emotional and you captured the essence of what these poor people go through. Very well written!
11/20/09
Wow, this is very well written! The descriptions are gripping and my favorite part is that the character's faith clearly shines through the darkness of a terrible event - just like that bright yellow rose.
this is lovely!i almost cried while reading it and i prayed along side too.really like to follow your writings.
Goosebumps! Oh, the terror of such an attack. Good writing.
11/21/09
Great description and flow from one paragraph to the next. And the yellow rose surviving is quite believable since the oddest things will be left untouched in a fire. Emotional and happy ending with the sisters finding each other again. Good work.
11/24/09
Beautifully done. You've got a great basis here, so my only suggestion is to think of ways to show without having to tell for emotion. With that focus in mind, your writing will grow beyond its already high quality. Well done!
11/25/09
A Well told story! Loved the single yellow rose.
11/25/09
I like your writing style. You clearly have talent. Even more, you have heart.

Mona