The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
11/13/09


We never had that rule when we were young...I think it's great! Right on with the topic too!

11/14/09
Your story has a nice flow to it. You told it well and it will be easy to remember.
What an awesome way for that camp to help control raging hormones! Great story.
What a great idea, and how to use it! It just goes to show that a brief write,like this, if done with colored flavor, can connect with the reader.

Keep writing!