The Official Writing Challenge
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It ended too soon. I wanted to see results of consequences.

I was thinking that the parents had the sweater and were saving it for birthday or Christmas. There could have been a great story line with her stealing the sweater, and learning about the one she already had.
Liked the story-I thought maybe Mom had put it on layaway! Watch the quotations for dialog--some are missing and I had to read things twice to be clear, but still a good story.