The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/05
Very special entry on this weeks subject. "Beautifully Written"
08/24/05
This is great. I am studying about this in my Sunday School lesson this week and I tell you, with your writing you hit said all the things that I have been studying about this is awesome.
08/25/05
Love it! Great teaching and good writing!
08/25/05
Beautiful job! And nice take on luggage. Excellent way to remind us and show us all packaged up this wonderful parable.
08/25/05
This is really good! I hope to see you in the winner's circle! Great work!
08/26/05
This reminded me of the Pharisee and the publican, and I love this poem. In fact I think I'll study your smithing. Very well written.
08/26/05
Duh...I really did read the title. That is how quickly I had forgotten. Senior moment! Sorry.
08/28/05
Brilliant! I love the content, the concept, the repetition of key lines, the rhythm ... in short, everything about it! WELL DONE!
08/28/05
Loved the creative approach to the topic.
08/29/05
A well written piece -good constrast!
09/02/05
Well done, I especially liked the rhythm of the poem. Creative look at luggage too, I really enjoy your Bible based pieces! God Bless, Karen
01/21/06
i THINK THIS IS AN EXCELLENT PIECE OF POETRY. THANK YOU.