The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/09
I love this story! It would be even better if you would show instead of tell!

I really love the opening paragraph. I was thinking perhaps a cartoon character or child's story.

Keep up the good work!
11/15/09
This is a nice story with a lot of heart. I like people like your Patti. They make the world better for sure.

I like the fantasy in the opening paragraph. Thanks for sharing