The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/09

Very descriptive of the day our Lord was crucified. This short piece would make a nice lengthy narrative! Good work. Blessings!
I did not really get it at first. I could tell there had been an earthquake or bombing. I was thinking maybe even Iraq, but the ending was a total surprise. Nicely done- hope this story is a winner!
11/15/09
Wow, the ending is great! Good writing. I like this one.