The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/09
The challenge was well written. The writer caught my interest from the beginning and I was not disapointed in the end. I love that the charactor overcame the fear.
I like the way you worked the flashbacks into the story. Good job!
11/15/09
I felt the child's fear. You crafted the story well with flashbacks and the present working together very well. Good ending.
11/18/09
Yikes! No wonder she was afraid of the water! I would be too!
11/18/09
I wasn't seeing the purple, but enjoyed the story. Then the purple scars...good take on the topic.