The Official Writing Challenge
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Definitely on topic.

I found this entry a little confusing because of the intro which led me to expect a journal entry from someone recovering from an addiction. As a 'cats fan myself (Go K-State!), I would have really loved to see this entry expanded into an ode from a rabid fan which somehow connects to a message about our faith.

Be careful about spacing and grammar as there were some misses there...but keep on writing, and for heavens sake, if you are writing about something you love then go all out in giving the reader a reason to love them too.

I've never been to Kansas. Thank you for sharing.
I was also very confused, and stumbled on typos and grammer errors.
I think you have it in you to embellish this story to the point of interest and desire of your audience to learn more about Kansas and the Wildcats! Perhaps you could rewrite it and submit it to the Circle Challenge(?)for review. We all have a 750 word limit so I would like to have seen you use more of them. Keep writing!