The Official Writing Challenge
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11/11/09
I love this metaphor: "my individuality will be buried in an unmarked grave of conformity." You threw me a bit because of calling what you did "breaking the law." Technically, it's still not breaking the law even though talking of the work of Christ in a public school or similar place can get a kid into some trouble and maybe even a lawsuit, but it's still not breaking the law. A different country wasn't mentioned, but if it was...that would make more sense. A tiny change and this is a great story.
I really like this article.