The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/09
cute story.
11/10/09
I love the way you have built this story around a child's viewpoint without moralising or poking fun at the child. And that's one switched on waitress you've got there. She could build a great customer base for her boss - or open her own restaurant some day!
Very cleverly written
11/11/09
Sounds like just the type of story that "Reader's Digest" would publish. Heartwarming and charming and to top it off the little boy had to have red hair and freckles. Perfect for the occasion.