The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked this story and it was well written. I think you'll be moving up quickly.
What a good story. It flowed perfectly! Very cool take on white.
Very intriguing! I enjoyed reading this very much, and knowing that it was inspired by a real person gave it a little extra oomph.
Good story and I believe could really happen!
Well written and very on topic. Good job.
Excellent pacing and feel, and a real rug-puller at the end. This should place well.
Your story is excellently written. You surely will be leaving beginners very soon.
Now that's an interesting story. Creative use of topic. I can see so much improvement as you are developing your talent.
Well done.

Wow! I love this emotion-filled story. Suspense, injustice, then a wonderful ending. Very nice!
Fantastic work with a great ending. I really appreciate the dialogue and the little details that added so much. Great work, I hope this is super successful, I loved it!
WOW! What a story packed with suspense, such intriguing characters and a happy ending. What else could a reader ask for? This is excellent and can I be the first to offer congrats on your First Place ribbon?
Rats! Di beat me to the punch! lol....congratulations on a very well-deserved first place! Wonderful story and awesome inspiration!
Yay! When I read this I had thought to myself..."she won't be in beginners much longer." So glad to see this one do so well. Move on up...
I love how the coffe mugs and saucers are staring at you in the beinning. Concise and yet full of detail. Well done and congratulations.
Congrats on your ribbon, Sarah!
Great story and well written. Congrats on 1st place!
Wonderfully crafted story! I enjoyed it very much! Congratulations on your 1rst place!
Awesome story!!! If you haven't written a book yet, I believe you should. If you have, you should write another one. This was so engaging.
This is a great story. I love reading some of my favorite author's older pieces and this one was a delight.