The Official Writing Challenge
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08/26/05
Amen. I like uncles like that one. That is about all I seen that needed some correction also, was the wrongly capitolized words, such as "Job" for one. Good story! God bless ya, littlelight
08/28/05
A very nice story (reminds me of Uncle Rhemus and Song of the South). (note - new paragraph new speaker for clarity). Over all, a very creative entry!
08/28/05
Reading back over -maybe I confused who was saying what,so ignore that part of my comment on the paragraphs lol.
This is a very creative and cute story! I think it would have been even better to jump straight into Uncle's stories. Great job!