The Official Writing Challenge
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11/06/09
I love the descriptions here and I was walking with Thomas feeling the chill and the gloom. It reminded me of times driving in the fog.The closing in feeling and the empty loneliness. Great writing. I look forward to reading more of your work!
11/10/09
Very intense descriptions. I first thought it needed more paragraphs, but the mass of print seemed to add its own emphasis to the emotions that accompany being encapsulated by fog. Very well done.
12/15/09
I could absolutely feel the tension as he was walking along.... Great job!!