The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/09
I like this story. Great job.
11/11/09
You have painted an excellent picture of gossips getting their comeuppance, but even more so of Christ's forgiveness and the imagery the Bible provides of the bridegroom coming for his bride. I had a few tears well up as I read, "When she became my daughter..." Good work.
11/11/09
Well told!