The Official Writing Challenge
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11/08/09
Great story. Well written too.
11/11/09
This is a lovely story. Good descriptions. Thank you.
Congratulations! Your story is beautiful; it really touched my heart. Excellent writing.
11/12/09
Your style is very Patricia St. John-ish. For some reason almost as soon as I began reading my mind went to "Treasure of the Snow." Well done.
Beautiful story, I loved how you brought everything together. Congratulations on 3rd place.
11/14/09
Wow, this was beautiful!

Congrats on a well deserved placing.

See you in Level 2! :-)
11/14/09
Very vivid images in this story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Congratulations!