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11/07/09
...Enjoyed your poem. Rhythm, rhyme, and meter are good. There has always been just as much sin in the hearts of men as there is today, only perhaps it wasn't acted on as openly and quickly at it seems now.
11/09/09
I think this is a really good piece. I also think that things have changed - this nation used to believe "in God we trust". When I was in high school in the 60s there was only one girl in a class of almost 600 who had parents who were divorced that I can remember. There was no abortion (not legal anyhow and not thousands/millions of babies). I definitely think we have become more like Sodom and Gomorrah and more openly too as a nation. Yes, sin existed back then but it is much more blatent now (I can't spell) Marijo