The Official Writing Challenge
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So very important to be equally yoked! I liked the story and the message. Just seemed a wee bit laborious getting through to the end. Maybe more about the yoke theme and less description in general would have made it all flow better.
11/07/09
Sweet and romantic. When we were in the theatre watching the first "Lord of the Rings," at one point my husband turned to me and said, "That five minute scene was at least 200 pages in the book." The right descriptiveness can mean everything. It's our job as fledgling writers to find out by trial and error just what that looks like. Keep up the good work.
Nice story about finding that special someone that loves God too!