The Official Writing Challenge
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11/06/09
Your description of the cat is superb: I could picture him very well. Cat lovers will enjoy being reminded of their own cat's antics.
11/10/09
I enjoyed your descriptions and the liveliness as well. Breaking into extra paragraphs would build the story's progress, but I can see more cat stories coming our way. Well done.