The Official Writing Challenge
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11/05/09
I was assuming that this was a modern day adventure until the writer looked up and "saw eyes and teeth yellow with scurvy." I like how the character was able to switch modes of service to the Lord and make the best of a difficult opportunity.
11/11/09
I like this. Still positive in a bad situation. Keep writing.
Great writing.
This could easily be a novel - so much story left to tell and I want to know it all!
Thanks
Interesting read. A story idea related to piracy, and a conflicted believer aboard.

Well done.