The Official Writing Challenge
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11/05/09
This story held my interest and was well constructed, told and described. Camille's physical and mental struggles were believable. Having been a strict parent, I thought the added punishment, mostly of the white face paint/object lesson, was a bit much.
11/07/09
A job well done. What an appropriate punishment for these boys after their shenanigans. Good story.