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Absolutely loved this!
11/05/09
Excellent walk through the park to a surprise ending. The grandfather shows patience, love, and gratitude. It's fun to be reminded of how thankful we need to be through a heartwarming story.
11/07/09
This was simply lovely. I have a friend who is nearly blind (just in the past three months). It does change a person's perception on things, fear sets in, etc. I was glad to see your "Gramps" so in tune with God giving Him the glory for the lovely day. I suspect he at times thanked Him for the little he could see. Great job.
08/28/11
Truly enjoyed this story, and, of course, I had to re-read it again, to appreciate the details more once I realized he was blind! Very well done, Mr. Terry!