The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/09
LOL! I feel for this poor girl, I know the feeling when a specific thing (like the peas) are supposed to stay that way and they get changed that I want it fixed right away!

Good humor and voice. I enjoyed the read!
11/03/09
I like this very much. You have a good sense of humor in this piece. I was blessed with a Mom that could actually cook anything and make it taste good. Liver was the one thing I found difficult to swallow, but as you mentioned I loved my TV so, down the hatch. Thanks for writing this. You did very well.
11/04/09
A great build up to such a let down in the teen's life: no TV. For this day and age, the teen didn't sound all that disrespectful in her comments, unless commenting at all was the disrespect. Otherwise, maybe making the comments a bit more disresectful in tone would help. Fun piece to read.