The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/09
I was waiting to see where the topic tied in on this and it finally came. It would've been easier to put the ending together if the verse had been somewhere in the middle-just a thought.

Good shock factor for the ending. I was slightly confused though, was he driving home when the truck hit him? or walking across the street to his house?

Thanks for sharing!
11/03/09
Well, if there were ever hints to a bad day getting worse,... and yet better, since heaven was in the picture...this was it. I wasn't sure whether you meant this to be comical or serious. I suppose it's okay for it to go either way.
Entertaining. Good work.