The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed your story. Watch for grammar, correct spelling, and dividing into paragraphs for easier reading. The content is meaningful and may help someone in that situation realize that God is there for her, ready to help her choose the right path.
11/03/09
It's a wise parent who surprises their children with a reaction they weren't expecting. This is a good and wise reaction that leans on God for the strength and courage to do the right thing and also show love to your wayward child. God is always showing us, his wayward children, his love and mercy. Good writing.
Very good characterization and dialogue with an excellent message.
11/05/09
Good start! Glad you're in the challenge :-)

I liked the mother's response. Real, but with the love, grace and understanding parents need to show their children in such a situation. "no one's opinion matters but God."