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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Green (10/22/09)

TITLE: GOD'S NATURE
By monique sherman
10/28/09


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GODíS NATURE

The winterís cold harsh weather has dried up and wither away every thing it had. So it goes through a period. Where it struggles to survive. It depends on God for its protection during this time. It looks like it might not make it. But God take care of it. He gives it water and sunshine from heaven above. God see it through its tough time.


Then they the days get longer. The weather get warmer . All of the nourishment God has provided in tough times helps it bring forth life again. The trees get stronger and it is ready to do things all over again.


The tree begins to grow buds, small at first. You have to get close enough to see. But then after a while buds become leaves, big and bright. The most wonderful emerald green. God has given the tree everything it needs so that it can give to someone else.


When the leaves are full grown and the tree is full covered. It become a comfort to someone else providing shading and a place of peace


We are like trees we go through different stages in life. Sometimes we are alive and thriving. Everything is good. Then there are times we are stripped down bare. We donít know what to do. We feel like we are dying inside. We have nothing left to give but as soon as we think it is all over for us. That is the very moment God steps in. He fills us with new life and gives us something new to give to others. He know what he is doing. Even when we donít. God Bless.


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Sara Harricharan 10/31/09
Some typos and grammatical things, but overall a good idea. I think this might have worked better in a past tense, as if someone is reflecting over it. Good job though-thanks for sharing!
Laura Manley10/31/09
With a little work, this could make for a good story. You seem to have incomplete sentences and I would agree with the previous reviewer that the tense should perhaps be different.
Colin Swann11/01/09
Thanks for sharing - enjoyed! Have a look at some of the other entries for what the other comments are pointing out - grammar, sentence structure and tense - maybe one of the masters will help you on a personal level if you ask on the notice board.

Kee[p writing, thanks again for sharing.

Colin
Marie Fink11/03/09
You spoke of seasons of life and seasons of the year without using the word "season" once. This is showing glimpses of a gift of story telling/writing. Keep refining your work.