The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/09
A nice, easy-reading story. I wished I knew a little more about Ruth Ann though. Instead of just being described as a woman in a nursing home, I wished I knew more about her, so I could really care about the ending.

you have a good message though, to be thankful. Thanks for sharing!
11/03/09
As the baby boomer generation gets older and numbers of elderly, who are living longer, increase, stories such as these will be a great encouragement to many people.