The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/09
Hehehe Very cute.

In general, try not to write about the "challenge topic" in your challenge article.... If you were to share the story outside of FW, people would have a hard time understanding.

I must admit, I was wondering about this one, until I got to the end. Good job. :)
11/02/09
Good made me smile. Thanks for sharing this. Looking forward to more from you. Colin
11/02/09
Clever poem. The couplets make it interesting and easy to rhyme. It flowed well and was entertaining.