The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/09
I like the way you weave Kermit through this. A nice read with some good information.
11/01/09
I wondered if anyone would include Kermit the Frog in this topic of green. You've done so without overdoing it. Nicely done!
Who would've thought that we could learn so much from Kermit the Frog? He served as a whimsical (and cute!) prop to communicate some helpful tips, and inspiration, for the topic of environmental stewardship. Good use of strong nouns and verbs, instead of adjectives, to describe (especially loved "enthralled...ballad, captured, dodging, whimsy...). I also loved your use of the quote, "It's not easy being green," to introduce your topic. Terrific! Great transition between your first and second paragraphs, and your conclusion was strong, as well. Great entry!